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Lina

A Poem

By Mother CombsPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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Every year, on the eve of the winter solstice

When the world is at it’s coldest

You can count on her to come home to visit

She does not come to sit

But instead, she’s pacing the floors

Looking for that which was once hers

She rises from her cold, hard bed

Getting brambles caught on her head

Passing through the frozen forest

From her cursed place of rest.

Beautiful Lina

Dreadful Lina

She will find what she attempts to find

And when she does, she won’t be so kind

Reaching deep into the heart

Of the man who tore hers apart

Choking him to death

She will take his breath

Until rigor has his body froze

Then, she can return to her peaceful doze

Inside the forgotten ground

Never to be disturbed by human sound

Vengeful Lina

Gorgeous Lina

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About the Creator

Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶about a year ago

    Lovely rhythm and rhyme… chillingly terrifying!

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    Oh, this is wickedly beautiful and so very, very well-written! In the league of Edgar A. Poe!

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    Oh, this is a dark little, pretty little poem about sweet sweet revenge. Loved it, Sharon!

  • Wonderful words with a shade of darkness

  • Kenny Penn2 years ago

    Wow I loved the darkness in this poem, so good. Vengeance is sweet

  • Well-wrought! What was your inspiration for this one?

  • I am so frightfully stirred by this that I will cross this name Lina off the list for my next hen 😁

  • Omgggg, I soooo wanna be Lina! She's my role model!

  • Moharif Yulianto2 years ago

    Scared reader Impressed reader

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    Scared reader Impressed reader 😉

  • D. A. Ratliff2 years ago

    This is powerful! I enjoyed this poem very much. Well, done.

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