
A novelist in his poetic journey to bloom ( would it be a fictional or realistic ending ) give me ur povs
far behind the clouds
where things are clear and soo bright
a hot glowing raged ball
a morning star rising in the sky
blooming lilies while passing by
and I,
a hint of vanilla, wood-based lonesome
from a dim-lot room, ink-stained fingers,
coffee steam rises, a curl in the air
one sip, bitter and strong
eyes fixed on the window lost in stare
wide open eyes lost in the gaze
i see a vision of beauty i long denied,
cause who am i-
junky of words, slave to the pen
in my fantasy land, we dance everyday and sway
yet comes the dawn, and so she slips away
...
TBC
About the Creator
chaimaa alidrissi
a poet who’s language is expressing emotions through rhyming words 🤎
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions




Comments (2)
I would never stop romanticizing the sun after reading this beautiful poem!
Lovely metaphors