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Light breaks Water

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By Mark GrahamPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
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Light breaks water

blinding and reflective do

dreams come true, please.

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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  • Imola Tóth7 months ago

    Oh, that little "please" at the end really made me feel all the hope and longing for the dreams that didn't come true yet.

  • Marie381Uk 7 months ago

    So lovely, I hope your dream comes true 🙏🏆✍️📕

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