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Light Breaks Water

The new Day is born as night fade’s away

By Marie381Uk Published 7 months ago 1 min read
By George’s girl 2025

Light Breaks Water

Dark water waits, flat and cold,

its surface holding the weight of night.

Then the light comes,

not soft,

not gentle,

but sharp,

a blade that splits the black.

Ripples catch it first,

small shoulders of silver

rolling outwards,

breaking the stillness

like glass underfoot.

The shine spreads fast,

cutting through shadows,

no warning,

no care.

It’s day now,

whether the water wanted it or not.

And for a moment,

before the wind wakes,

before the world stirs,

light owns the water.

No questions,

no answers,

just the cold shine

breaking what was dark

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Wow Genius6 months ago

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  • Amy7 months ago

    Beautiful imagery

  • Fazal Hadi7 months ago

    Great words...

  • Krysta Dawn7 months ago

    Beautiful and peaceful

  • Sandy Gillman7 months ago

    This was so calming to read :-)

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