Life Tells You To Keep Moving Forward
What if, I don't want to move forward?
๐ป๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐,
"I've matured now",
I need to learn to move on from things,
But what if, I don't want to move on,
๐พ๐๐๐ ๐๐, ๐ฐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐,
Overthink,
Cry,
Feel heartbroken,
Feel abandon,
๐พ๐๐๐ ๐๐, ๐ฐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ,
Until someone makes me glad,
๐พ๐๐๐ ๐๐, ๐ฐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐
Away from those who tell me,
To keep moving forward,
๐พ๐๐๐ ๐๐, ๐ฐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐,
All day,
Everday,
Thinking about how,
๐ฐ'๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐.
About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Dark, Surrealism, Psychological, Nature, Mythical, Whimsical
~๐ข๐ฝ๐ธ๐ป๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ผ ๐ฌ๐ช๐ท ๐ซ๐ฎ ๐ช ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฝ๐ฝ๐ต๐ฎ ๐ญ๐ฎ๐ฎ๐น~
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Comments (3)
Real feelings articulated that I have every week! ๐ excellent job, but please donโt stay there too long.. I know u said not to say that, lol - but just be like โIโm giving myself JUST ten minutes to be super depressed!โ ๐ Then see what happens after..
This hit me so hard because this is exactly where I am now. Loved your poem!
. Well Written My Dear...... Great One