Liberating Luminator
Some of the simplest things can be so freeing.
Oh, joyous moon,
I live to see you.
From morning to noon,
My love is true.
______________________
Glowing through the night,
A change from deep inside.
You are so beautifully bright,
I wish I didn’t have to hide.
______________________
You are what moves me,
I now exist only to worship.
The only reason to be,
Relieve my former hardship.
______________________
Your rays start the painful change,
I have become something inhuman.
Turning into something strange,
My old self disappeared then.
______________________
Gone is the fragile person,
A large creature in their place.
My gift is such a God send,
So is the horrifying new face.
About the Creator
Raphael Fontenelle
Horror movie fan trying to write decent horror.
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Your love I know is not fake. Starting with such a bold and reverent line. Awe it's so cute. That line about you wishing that you didn't have to hide. Wow. You even went as far as showing the moon that it relieves your former hardship. I bet the moon feels happy now. To know of it's power over you. Ooo turning into something strange. You drew me in with intrigue here. The horrifying new face. This took a turn.. a surprising but very fitting one. In line with the appearance of the moon. Fantastic work Raphael. The rhythm —rhymes were so smooth and engaging. 🤗❤️