LET THE RAIN COME DOWN
Can't Say Out Loud
Pleasures
Treasures
Lies
Spies
Who will prevail
Or fail
Let the Rain Come Down.
Juggling, like a clown.
Smoke and mirrors
And electioneers.
Distractions
Infractions.
Restrictions.
Jurisdictions.
Ideas among.
Bite your tongue.
Let the Rain Come Down.
Tumbling to the ground.
All politicians
Missions
Use the Frame
It's their Game
Sirens and a bell!
Screaming, Go to Hell
Let the Rain Come Down
Listen to the sound.
Negativity
Passativity
People's fury
Judge and jury
Complain
Insain
Let the Rain Come Down
Derogatory noun
Impulsiveness
Mind-your-own-business
Haters
Administrators
Sicko
Ditto
Let the Rain Come Down
About the Creator
Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
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I look at the world and say, ‘I have no words’, and here you are, with all the right ones! 🤗Congratulations on this TS x
Powerful, punchy, and poignant! Nice one, Babs 👏
Loved the pace and rhythm of this. Amazing work
This one made me exhale...breathe in and out. Amen. Hi Babs, hope all is well. You sure told em. Congrats luv.
Babs, this was absolutely outstanding. I love how you were able to make this both revealing yet seeming like you’re still holding your tongue. The one word lines, the strong word choice. Wow. Speechless. Congratulations on your leaderboard placement 🤗♥️🎉🎊🎉
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congrats! I loved the fragmented rhythm of the poem! Very well done!
Congratulation on your TS🎉
Congratulation on your top story 🕯️🌺🌺
Wash away the sins....let it rain. Congrats,
Yes...wash all of it away :)
Hi. I’m new to this(literally my first day posting):) and I’m still exploring and learning about the platform. Randomly came across this poem. Loved this poem Babs. Felt the corruption and deception in society. Love the free style
Many heavy thoughts… let them all pour down! With the rain comes the truth… I feel it’s soon to come in torrents.
Bloody brilliant. Just about sums the world up RN. 💜
Let it all pour !!!! Love the repetition. It make it powerful. Congratulations on top story.
The repetition of "Let the Rain Come Down" really drives home that sense of cleansing or maybe surrender, like a release after holding so much in. Congratulations on your Top Story!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
It feels like rain coming down to read this Babs. Great poem. Congratulations!
Wonderful poem, Babs! Love all the rhyme and you picked a dime of a photo to accompany it!
Excellent words and deserved accolade
This is a fun take on the challenge! I love the form you put into it. That took some effort. Congrats!
Loved the word play and format. It felt urgent that we understand our part in making the world a better place. 💖
oh Woaw I love it You are the Best :) ! feeling it some days are unbearable with the whole you greatly expressed it
Very good,Babs!!💯👍
I LIKE this side of you! Nicely done Babs!