Let’s get smoky
Fire as an end to loneliness
Let’s start a fire
Just you and I
Cuz we’re only here for a little while before we
...
Die
Not to be morbid but each minute counts
And I’d rather spend them with love than without
So!
Let’s start a fire
We shall press our embers against bone-dry tinder
And when the kindling
Sputters
And throws up smoke,
We shall breathe upon the heat,
As God breathed His own spirit upon the dusts and gave them life
So shall we sacrifice
Our own breath
To give our burning
The breath of life!
Then
We may incinerate whatever we wish
We may throw our burdens and traumas upon the blaze
Let us cremate all our walls
And we shall relish the warmth
Destruction casts such wonderful light!
I will wrap my tongue around your flames
Until my mouth sizzles
I will breathe in your incense
Until I cough and ache in the haze
Until all I know is the taste of our
Burnt Offerings
Let’s start a fire
And though the cold may close in around us
And though the dark may press in against us
We shall tend our circle with care
So huddle close,
In this circle of light
Huddle close
In this lonely warmth
Let us rebuke
These,
The long dark nights of our souls
Let's start a fire
And watch the smoke rise into the onyx skies
Let’s start a fire
And let the sparks dance over our heads
And like the sparks, rising to the stars
We two
Shall defy the very thought of despair
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Author's note: Loneliness and desperation can be powerfully seductive-- if we're cold enough, we might reach out for any warmth. Love can be risky. Take care not to latch onto that which burns.
About the Creator
Sam Spinelli
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Comments (16)
I felt a sweet uplifting and a calling while reading this beautiful poem. Indeed, life needs togetherness and compassion. We all prefer love within warm circles. :)
Oh this is so great, fires desperately needed all around. Heck, lets just start a FIRE revolution. Love it a lot. congrats
I enjoyed this read! Very creative and expressive. Loneliness can make you reach out to others in surprising ways. Congrats on your top story!
Nice
❤️ 🔥 love it!
Whew..fanning myself...those verses are hot! Well done. 👏👏👏
Fantastic, I could feel the flames building, and Light my Fire was a perfect choice.
Clever work, my friend! The metaphor is working sooo well! Congrats!
This poem had so much momentum to it!
Top S
This is emberburnt Flameborne tongue with the right amount of heat to scorch the surface of all false threads but still leave the inside intact for longer introspective use…. Me likey 🔥👊🏽
This is such a powerful metaphor for connection the fire representing both warmth and danger. I love how you weave the act of burning with the idea of purging trauma and loneliness. It's both beautiful and dangerous, just like love itself. So impactful.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I like your style this was flaming hot
You captured the way desperation and hope mix together when you need a little warmth. The fire image works so well. Great job!
Love is always risky, and that's a risk I never wanna take again. Nothing is worth that pain. Your poem was so beautiful. Loved it!