le chef d'oeuvre de la vie
More inspiration, positivity. Poem - Life's Masterpiece.

I—
within
the memories
replayed
I—sat and watched
within my mind's eye
a spectrum of experience
beside my lover, my friend
I—let my mind fly
within my gaze
glorious grandeur
layers enveloped in layers
rich tapestry
dense packed history
shimmery
messy
—
there is magic at sunset, mystery at sunrise, the settling of the manic noise, then dawn's chorus bursts bright with the sound of—life
—
I—took a walk through the joy and sorrow
coucher de soleil magique
within my gaze, within my mind's eye
lever de soleil mystérieux
the memories and the past, technicolour
le refrain de l'aube éclate le son brillant de la vie
replayed at the drive-in, on lover's lane
t'élève au sommet des montagnes
I—sat and watched the good, the bad
within my mind's eye, it caught my gaze
a spectrum of experience, good to bad
beside my lover, my friend for life
I—let my mind fly through the ether
within my gaze, within my mind's eye
glorious in grandeur and the minor
layers enveloped in layers of everything
hope, honesty, love, laughter
sadness, madness, betrayal, arrayal
rich tapestry, a cliched mystery
dense packed history, shimmery, messy
—
there is so much that brings you down, so much that lifts you up, drags you kicking and screaming, raises you to the top of mountains
—
I—took a walk through the joy and sorrow
within my gaze, within my mind's eye
the memories and the past, technicolour
replayed at the drive-in, on lover's lane
I—sat and watched the good, the bad (J'ai fait une promenade à travers la joie et le chagrin)
within my mind's eye, it caught my gaze
a spectrum of experience, good to bad (dans mon regard, dans mon esprit)
beside my lover, my friend for life
I—let my mind fly through the ether
within my gaze, within my mind's eye
glorious in grandeur and the minor
layers enveloped in layers of everything
hope, honesty, love, laughter (J'ai fait une promenade à travers la joie et le chagrin)
sadness, madness, betrayal, arrayal
rich tapestry, a cliched mystery (dans mon regard, dans mon esprit)
dense packed history, shimmery, messy
—
magic sunset coucher de soleil magique
mystery sunrise lever de soleil mystérieux
settling manic noise, dawn's chorus bursts bright sound of—life
le refrain de l'aube éclate le son brillant de la vie brings you down, lifts you up, drags you kicking—screaming, raises you to mountain tops
—
then the singer sings "all these things I've done"
he knows we know
I got soul but I'm not a soldier
then the singer sings-
are we "human" or are we dancer?
-
I—je
within dans
the memories les souvenirs
replayed rejoué
I—sat and watched Je me suis assis et j'ai regardé
within my mind's eye dans les yeux de mon esprit
a spectrum of experience un éventail d'expériences
beside my lover, my friend à côté de mon amant, mon ami
-every little thing she does is magic-turns me on
I—let my mind fly Je laisse mon esprit voler
within my gaze dans mon regard
glorious grandeur grandeur glorieuse
layers enveloped in layers couches enveloppées dans des couches
rich tapestry riche tapisserie
dense packed history une histoire dense et chargée
shimmery chatoyant
messy désordonné
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Author's Notes: Wanted to do another positive and upbeat piece, but also a bit...offbeat. So there you go. For reference, there are references to two songs by The Killers, "All These Things I've Done" and "Human" and the song by The Police, "Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic". The poem was not inspired by the amazing piece by Matisse, but I feel it pairs nicely with it.
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Comments (12)
An absolutely incredible piece, Paul! The interwoven use of English and French flows beautifully, and I immediately caught on to that reference from The Killers (one of my favorite tracks of all time). I also particularly enjoyed the interludes between certain stanzas. A moment to catch our collective breath before diving beneath the surface once more. Phenomenal, I can't wait to read more of your work!
Aha! At last being bilingual has paid off! This was a thrill to read. I personally adore this and think it deserves a Top Story. Really wonderful and very magical.
This was certainly a fun way to test my very rusty high school French knowledge, I’d give myself a C-. Beautiful work, Paul!
That was fabulous. Well done, buddy.
This is so packed... with everything! I feel I would need more time and energy to truly experience all the intricacies. This probably means it's good!
Oof. This had a touch of the metaphysical poets to me. I loved your lines about the magic of sunset and mystery of sunrise. A stunner this one! Ps - am a big Killers fan - some of my preferred running music for sure!
Oooo, arrayal and chatoyant are new words for me. Loved your Paulitical poem! 🥐🍩
Wow, Paul!!! This is magnifique! I adore the way you incorporated the french translations throughout (and possibly more intentionally in the last bit before the author's note). It added so much, particularly the way it builds to a more concrete understanding of those lines. But, I'll repeat---wow. The entire piece boggles my mind, truly. I was jolted out of it with the Killers' reference, BUT I don't think it detracts. More, unexpected. Brilliant work, my friend!!
I do t know French, but the poem weaves words that speak to my feelings nonetheless less. Lovely
How we choose to perceive our lives and our beloved, can create magic or madness. I’m glad that you have chosen to celebrate the magic. And that, my friend, is why this poem pairs so nicely with the Matisse. Both are celebrations!
Your poetry so resonates with me. A chaotic, fizzling, irresistible kind of mania ✨
Good thing I know French. What a poem you have here that read as an epic on living life.