
That day that I promised, “For better or worse”
I never meant something more true
But love, like narcotics, is often a curse
And that’s what it’s turned out with you
You said, “I’m not happy and want to move on”
Dismissing the joy that we had
Whatever we had was apparently gone
How could something so good be so bad
I’d made the commitment, “Til death do us part”
Regardless the hurdles or pain
I wasn’t naive since I knew in my heart
With most every rainbow there’s rain
I recently started a journal of thought
Like a Band-Aid that covers a hurt
It’s that salve for the burn your decision begot
To stop me from feeling like dirt
So now you keep texting he’s treating you wrong
And you’re wanting me back like before
I thought for a minute but didn’t take long
Then I wrote in my journal once more
“The grass WASN’T greener, she seems to have learned
I wonder the lessons it’s taught her
She didn’t think twice before bridges were burned
The grass is more green where you water”
You made your decision with hopes to trade up
A decision that left me a wreck
Yes, sometimes it’s not ‘til we’ve emptied our cup
That we finally get off of the deck
I’m seeing a lady who’s putting me first
It’s exciting this journey we’re on
If any more happy I likely would burst
And we BOTH love to water the lawn
About the Creator
Earl W. Pearl
I’ve been writing poetry (rhyming mostly) since about 2014 and have recently transitioned to writing novels and short stories. My poetry genres are faith, humor, social issues, politics, pretty much any subject matter.
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Your stream of consciousness is so beautiful and familiar.