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Last Breath

Gasp

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Last Breath
Photo by Michael & Diane Weidner on Unsplash

There, beneath the ice

The darkness rises for air

Caring not from who

Haikusurreal poetry

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Sean A.4 months ago

    Gasp indeed! Loved how the final line gives it just that little twist to the expected

  • A. J. Schoenfeld4 months ago

    Chills.

  • Mark Graham4 months ago

    One chilling poem you have here. I could almost hear the gasping. Good job.

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