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Lake Glaze

reflections in the summer stillness

By Ellie HoovsPublished 7 months ago β€’ Updated 7 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Runner-Up in Light Breaks Water Challenge

July's sun lingers in the cobalt sky,

caught mid-sentence,

slipping golden syllables

onto the lake's reflective, glassy, skin,

making clones of dragonflies and clouds

that float above the inky mirror of it.

The trees lean in,

eavesdroppers, branches entwined,

hands held in anticipation,

like breath caught

before diving into the murky unknown.

The breeze waits with me,

the hovering humid haze

wrapping warmth around my forearms,

lacing my neck with diamonds of sweat,

the slumbering stillness of it

a cat basking in golden beams

that break through windows,

a welcome intruder that never

needs to ring the doorbell.

I peer into the black, skating the surface

with long seeking gazes,

depths of knowing just beyond the cover.

My fingers long to thumb through pages,

and let my eyes skim past the tension

to measure the density in the bottom

which doesn't hold oxygen.

The world softly exhales,

reassuring hushes that dance in the willows,

rippling soft breaks into the lake glaze,

and I remember myself,

not as the ever unsettled silt,

but as a shimmer,

the quiet light

that pirouettes atop the breaks,

skating the undulating surface,

a daylight star, sparkling,

that never sinks in.

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About the Creator

Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran6 months ago

    Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Cathy holmes6 months ago

    This is simply beautiful, and carries such a peaceful vibe. Well done, Ellie.

  • Calvin London6 months ago

    Very nice, Ellie

  • Joe O’Connor7 months ago

    This was a wonderful read Ellie, and I'm assuming an entry into the Light Breaks Water challenge? Good luck in it- I bet there'll be a ton of entries, but this should do well:) It's suuuuper descriptive, and I really liked "onto the lake's reflective, glassy, skin, "making clones of dragonflies and clouds" early on.

  • Jasmine Aguilar7 months ago

    Loved this! So peaceful and tranquil! Reminded me of the most ideal way to spend a summer afternoon.

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