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Knives

A poem

By Sara WilsonPublished 2 months ago β€’ Updated 2 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Knives
Photo by Dmitry Shkaev on Unsplash

The house was filled with words that cut like knives

Their voices pressed me down until I broke

I walk away though shadows plead to stay.

πŸ–€

The silence hid the ruin of our lives

A doctrine carved in cruelty they spoke

The house was filled with words that cut like knives.

πŸ–€

I starved myself to quiet all their drives

An empty plate became my final cloak

I walk away though shadows plead to stay.

πŸ–€

The scars I carved were proof of what survives

A body marked by grief they never woke

The house was filled with words that cut like knives.

πŸ–€

Their judgment burned, obsession still derives

A labyrinth of pain I can’t revoke

I walk away though shadows plead to stay.

πŸ–€

No family bond can heal what it deprives

I claim my peace beyond the weight they spoke

The house was filled with words that cut like knives,

I walk away though shadows plead to stay.

πŸ–€

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About the Creator

Sara Wilson

I love Ugly Things.

I try and be active AND interactive.

I write... whatever I feel.

Sometimes it's happy.. sometimes it isn't. But it's real. And it's me.

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  • Shirley Belk2 months ago

    Made me "feel!" excellent :)

  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    Incredible villanelle Sara! Can't imagine this not placing highly. The imagery and emotion are blistering and that last stanza has a beautiful resilience.. well done

  • Tiffany Gordon2 months ago

    "I claim my peace beyond the weight they spoke!" 😱That is so powerful that it needs to be trademarked or placed on a T shirt! Such a fierce & empowering piece Sara! Go gurl! πŸ«ΆπŸΎπŸ’•πŸ’ͺ🏾

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