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KIWI ON THE BALCONY

...ONE MENTAL NOTE

By CarmenJimersonCrossPublished 4 years ago 1 min read

~ONE MENTAL NOTE~

We did arrive

one into the other

I stretched before my windows gate

as you napped away thru dawn

with ides of words unspoken

our mind's eye staged the porn.

You napped away thru dawn's mistake

I dallied near the balcony

and we locked eye to eye.

This gasp

- a stutter

and your mind echoes my name

- aflutter

as my heart palpates

and you stroke my

inner urges

you lie there

and here I stand.

Apart,

we are yet together

beyond our latent words suggest

to meet...

to meet.....

to meet for this repast.

Repast of what we could have known

- what should have come asunder

Repast amid this fruited mess

and our love laid to splendor.

They played it "splendor in the grass"

but we had it, "OUR REPAST"

the balcony & kiwi

Love as Lunch

this mental note in passing.

(C Cross 3/2022)

love poems

About the Creator

CarmenJimersonCross

proper name? CarmenJimersonCross-Safieddine SHARING LIFE LIVED, things seen, lessons learned, and spreading peace where I can.

Read, like, and subscribe! Maybe toss a dollar tip into my "hat." Thanks! Carmen (still telling stories!)

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