Kerosene Lamp vs Cold Child
Haiku for the Small Heat challenge
By Lana V LynxPublished 20 days ago • Updated 20 days ago • 1 min read
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"Don't touch the glass! Hot!"
Grandma tells my frozen hands
Too late, fingers burnt.
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Lana V Lynx
Avid reader and occasional writer of satire and short fiction. For my own sanity and security, I write under a pen name. My books: Moscow Calling - 2017 and President & Psychiatrist
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Comments (8)
I felt that too---- I used to tell my children that "Hot"---- This is great Lana, a great entry for the challenge. Nicely Done!!!
Lana, great haiku for the challenge! I remember my brother touching the wood stove of a family member. We didn't have one in our house when he was small.💕💗💕
Oh no! I understand that!
I felt that!
Ha. I see we had similar experiences of not learning from not doing first ha. This great Lana.
Even if grandma told me on time, I still touched... I had some old forgotten memories popping up now 😅 Love these kind of haikus that remind me of things I didn't even know I forgot.
Lol, serves the kid right. Loved this!
Oh no!! Hope it wasn’t too bad!😵💫