Kaleidoscopic Distractions
similar/different
i am an embezzler of embellishments
and i've come for many things
you won’t even know i'm there
not until you feel the sting
i am both the puppet and the master
tied up in oh so many strings
each string a knot of many riddles
but they are not what i bring
i bring no slick or tricky revelations
i am completely bereft of tense situations
no hearty or heady salutations
no ill will or flaccid flirtations
i come bearing bent light
and other pale attractions
i bring you lost in a mirror maze
and other kaleidoscopic distractions
i bring the whispers from the dream
and other secrets from the dark
but i bear not only the gift of the flame
i bring you the spark
i'm selling shadows
in the light
i'm hiding darkness
in the night
i have a different poster
for the same freak show
and other things
no one needs to know
i am the cause and the effect
and this maw is of my creation
wild horses and all that
+ poetic license and concatenation
i am the calm i am the storm
i am the dark i am the light
i am the cold i am the warm
i am the day i am the night
i am the sickness i am the health
i am the poor i am the wealth
i am the hurt i am the kind
i am the many words i leave behind
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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Comments (14)
Congratulations on Top Story!! Well Deserved!!!
This is wonderful-all the pairing and the simplicity, yet it is complex! Congratulations on the TS.🥳🥳
we shared kaleidoscopic visions and top stories-- congrats
Beautiful Poem. Congratulations on Top Story!!
Lovely poem, your words were painted beautifully!
So phenomenally written! Your word choice is absolutely pristine.
Good work...embezzler! 👍🏽 💸
This is dazzling! A poetic carnival of contrasts and mysteries, weaving light and shadow into something hypnotic. Feels like stepping into a dreamscape of words. Pure brilliance!✨ Congratulations on your incredible TS 🎉
I really like the picture in conjunction with your flow of words in this poem. Great job! 👏
sheesh so many great lines.. 'I am selling shadows in the dark...' but the opening line reeled me in so fast.. well put-together!
I liked it dear.
Excellent play on words and I agree with Kelli; that line is one of my favorites. This is a slick piece of writing and the cover image choice couldn't be better!
I am the puppet and the master caught up in many strings. I love this word play so much. Excellent piece
Wow Brenton. This is pretty awesome. Great work mate. 👍👍