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Just Water, and a Place to Hide

A journey of survival begins

By Marie381Uk Published 6 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Just Water, and a Place to Hide

Tadpoles stir in the puddled shade,

slipping through weed like a whisper made,

black commas wriggling, bold and small,

each one dancing to nature’s call

No legs yet, just a sweeping tail,

alive in a world too damp to fail

they cluster close in muddy streams

curled in the heat of summer dreams

No need for wings or polished show,

they’ve got the current, soft and slow

soon enough, they’ll lose their spin,

grow strong legs, then hop within

But here they are, just dots with grace,

sliding quiet from place to place

no questions asked, no rush, no pride,

just water, and a place to hide

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Sid Aaron Hirji6 months ago

    reminds me of being a kid and going to Kelowna

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