Just because you love the ocean doesn't mean you have to drown in it.
Saltwater Secrets
Twilight bleeds across the jagged coastline,
Waves churning like restless memories,
Salt-worn cliffs stand witness to the struggle
Between passion and preservation.
Your love is a tide pool contained, yet alive,
Reflecting sky and stone in its fragile mirror,
Each ripple a testament to boundaries
Drawn softly but firmly between devotion and surrender.
The horizon whispers ancient warnings:
Admiration is not submission,
Love is not drowning, but swimming
With purpose, with breath, with choice.
Granite shoulders of the shore
Hold back the hungry waters,
Showing how one can embrace beauty
Without being consumed by its wildness.
You can trace the ocean's outline
Without becoming its sacrifice,
Can stand ankle-deep in its vastness
And still keep your own shape intact.
Let the waves touch you but not claim you,
Let the salt sing but not silence you,
For loving something deeply
Does not mean losing yourself
In its infinite depths.
About the Creator
Ian Sankan
Writer and storyteller passionate about health and wellness, personal development, and pop culture. Exploring topics that inspire and educate. Let’s connect and share ideas!
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Comments (2)
Whoaaaa, this was mindblowing! Soooo deep!
Oh my goodness, I love how you used the ocean and the shore to describe how to love something. Such a beautiful message 🩵🩵🩵🩵