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Just a Little Farther

The Climb

By Mary K BrackettPublished 4 months ago 2 min read
Sunrise over Utah Mountains by M. K. Brackett September 18, 2022

Just a little farther

The words feel like a lie

It was just a little farther

Hours ago, miles back

Lungs and muscles burn

From the inside out

Like acid boiling up

From my core

One more step

I lie to myself

Just a little farther

Trudging forward, bent

Leaning into the incline

Up, Up, Upwards

Tired and beaten

To the unknown beyond

Focusing forward

Staring down

One foot in front of the other

Just a little farther

Across the gray bedrock

Spiderweb lines of black

Rust spots, Brown patches

Faded lichen and dried moss

There was green below

Behind, past tense

Back where I’d begun

Before the climb

Before the ascent

Just a little farther

My mind scoffs

As my lungs heave

No green, No before

There has only, always

Been the climb

The dark, dim grays

Of rock and sorrow

The sparkling black

Of loss and pain

Just a little farther

My guide coaxes

It’s a beautiful view

This way, This way

His excitement

Pulls my feet forward

Draws my thoughts

Out of the darkness

Back into the light

To the promise ahead

Just a little farther

A small, white flower

Appears beneath my gaze

Rising, Rebellious

It’s thin, green stem

Pushing bravely up

Through a crack

Its face stretched

Heavenward

Faithful as a child

Just a little farther

It says to me

I persevered

If I can, You can

The wind caresses me

Urging me forward

An eagle calls

Somewhere above

Encouraging me on

It pulls my gaze up

Just a little farther

The horizon opens wide

Embracing me in arms of blue

One more step, One last step

The world falls away

And I

I stand in awe

Of what lies before me

Filled with promise, Filled with hope

I gaze over the edge

To the canyon below

The silver river

Snaking through a green valley

Vibrant and teeming with life

The sunlight dances around me

A bright celebration

Of my arrival, of my journey

Turning, looking back

The sunlight plays

Across the hard-packed earth

Softening colors I thought

Just drab and dismal stone

The stone glitters

With jeweled sparks

The white flower

I thought solitary

Secluded and alone

Merely the gatekeeper

As her fellows bow all round

A welcoming rainbow

Before they catch the wind

And join the dance

The journey behind

Was more beautiful

Than I realized while climbing

Had only I looked, Paid attention

And the journey ahead

Far more spectacular

Than I have imagined

I told you, my guide grins

The climb is worth it.

inspirational

About the Creator

Mary K Brackett

Mary Brackett is a novelist, poet, & award-winning short story author. She has authored and co-authored articles for magazines with her husband and is currently writing a series of novels with her talented daughters.

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