Juliet Luminaries❤️🔥
An Umbrella wouldn't protect me from fireballs, but can my pride protect my heart from heartbreaking memories?📝...
Luminaries,
Fall from the sky…
Along with your affection burned away my pride!
I thirst to fumble upon your tenderness tonight...
My Sexy Juliet!
You make the Biggest planet seem small in my eyes...
I want to be caught in your Milkyway...
Dangers lurk from the worth we pay.
If I have to lose the world to find you,
Then I'll regret all that is true...
The Raven told the Eagle to lead the promenade to the flanks because a Phoenix had just Arrived!
The day we locked eyes...
My lips are invulnerable to speaking one's intellect, but Your smile is simply my sunshine.
Without you, I suffered the darkness for days...
I yearned for sunshine but only received Hurricanes...
My Sexy Juliet~
I admire your walk and still hold dear to The way you sashay...
A work of Art is all that I see,
When you strut, Your Beautiful physique...
You give class to the professor.
You are, each letter, of a Cabaret...
Your Heart reminds me of a Bow, Pretty, and Special!
If I was Christmas you'd surely be my present🎁...
Don't let the passion we tried to captivate, only break!
I love you and losing you
Was my biggest mistake...
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This marks my 200th Story Published on the Vocal Platform ❤️📝Thanks for Engaging with me and My Different writer's Personalities 🎊😊‼️
~Juliet Series ⬇️
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (35)
This is fire! 🔥🔥🔥
Congrats on your accomplishments, Lonzo. I’m proud to engage with you and love your work. You are the voice of rhythm, soul and love. 💖
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Dayum. 200. Great work, Lonzo! And love this piece. I like your different writer’s personalities. You always feel fresh and authentic to me - no matter which voice you choose.
200, wow!! 😍😍 Congratulations; that is such an accomplishment!! Such a beautiful poem, as always 🥹❤️❤️
Great poetry to mark the 200th!!
An awesome 200th poem! Congratulations Lonzo! 🎉
Way to hit that 200 - well done!
A really great poem to mark your 200th!!
You've got some great lines in this one! I really liked "You give class to the professor" and "I yearned for sunshine but only received Hurricanes." Congrats on your 200th story!!
Ok, adding on to the series of poems. Makes me wonder: who is this Juliet? Great piece.
Beautiful ♥️ Lonzo❤️
🥰. This is a great one!
I love your use of words in this one. Very playful.
This is my favorite part: The Raven told the Eagle to lead the promenade to the flanks because a Phoenix had just Arrived! Your storytelling and whimsical expression here is just gleaming through magically!!!🥰
omg great!
Filled with wondrous imagery
You're still knocking them outta the park Lonzo!
The never ending reach for beautiful Juliet, nice my friend 😊
I'm totally enjoying this series. Just hope it doesn't end the classical way.
Lonzo at his best. Beautiful words scattered everywhere. Heartache within heartache, yet still reaching high.
Your poetry is so timeless. Even when you make modern references, it would fit right into poetry’s golden age. 💖
What a gorgeous poem , it was like letting go of a beautiful butterfly . 🥰
Loved the sashay part! ☺️ Loving the new structure like a letter Lonzo. Best!