I kissed Juliet💋
Precisely Like The breeze blowing on a palm 🌴 Tree, she brushed up against me...
My mind was pondering like a warrior.
My heart was groping your Devotion.
I hungered with my wondering of hopeful lust to kiss you.
You moved closer to me, and
I muttered over your Beauty,
And spoke words in a symphony...
I hoped that you would hear me.
I watched as my True Love was,
Changing with the seasons...
Alone by myself,
Thinking:
If you dive, I'll drown trying to save you...
It was that warm
Summer Sunny day,
I caught a glimpse of you standing
sequestered in the backyard,
I thought roughly about backing out, but still, I approached you, and I've been thrilled ever since the first time we kissed❗
Juliet Series ⬇️
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Comments (11)
I am so jealous of your wording! From subtitle to content, you've got it going on.
Awww, this was absolutely so sweet!
This is gorgeous.
This is so romantic. This series is just wonderful Lonzo. 🌹
It's really impressive what you're doing with the 'Juliet' series. Great work Lonzo! 👏❗💗
Beautiful. 💙
This is absolutely gorgeous
awesome 🪄
Think I am reading them out of order, but love this, Lonzo! Beautiful work!
Wonderful continuation! I love how your poems lead to the next. Awesome job!
Oh My🥰🥰🥰🥰 this is so romantic and satisfying