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Twilight's celestial
illumination display
navigator's route.
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Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
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Comments (33)
It always amazed me how we can navigate by the stars!
I like how you gave beauty to the celestial lights while at teh same time pointing out the practical assistance it has given us.
Awesome haiku
beautiful haiku! who doesn't love those 'celestial navigators'?
Navigation. ✨ Yes! Great haiku, Babs. Hope you are going well.
As I slowly read the words, the meaning connected the dots and washed over me, when I got to the last word. It was such a profound revelation, I was taken by its magic. A masterpiece in three lines 👏🏽👌🏽🤗♥️
Love this. Navigator...twilight...this is otherworldly.
I love this haiku. It is awe inspiring, especially because of your use of the word "celestial". How beautiful.
Delightful 💙🤩… I love the night sky… wonderful how useful it is for navigation.
Beautiful Babs ❤️ The stars can speak to us ✨️
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Oh, how beautiful, Babs!! Great haiku!
I love your ending!
Aw Babs, this is stunning x C
Beautiful haiku Babs 🥰
Great use of words
felt like a journey.
Beautifully written. Celestial skies and dreams
Lovely haiku! So cleverly written.
Beautiful words, my friend. Well done.
great
Of course! A map!
Beautiful words, my friend. Well done.
Hi Babs, happy to see this beautiful haiku! Good to read your work again.
I love this poem. It's beyond the skyways♥️