Jazz Drumming
A poem derived from the 2014 film—Whiplash
“Not quite my tempo” — Terence Fletcher, Whiplash
Nineteen years young, talented swag
Gotta be the next Buddy Rich, it's all I’ve ever wanted,
Birdland
Racked by Daddy’s mediocrity,
I dream of being one of the great s
Drumming is all I think about
Jo Jones — Charlie Parker
Jazz Drumming
I swing by, land a score at Shafer school
ambitiously focused,
Gotta purrfect my double-time swing
passion , desire
Elvin Jones — Peter Erkskine
Jazz Drumming
I’m up on the guy to teach me, the man to help me reach my dreams
Terence Fletcher... brutal tutelage,
Conservatory professor
Double time swing, he hears me ting,
The beads of sweat splash my drum
gripping my drumsticks, stinging my thumbs
he’s noticed me!
I stop
WHY?
I pick up my sticks and flip up my riff
Youthful confidence
Insults start, Imma wind-up monkey!
I show him my rudiments, double-time swing
da-dum da-dum crash — tinggg
he’s gone, smug shit
Fletcher picks me out, Nassau Band playtime beat
Double time swing
He charms to disarm, testing my skills ,
Were you rushing or were you dragging?
start counting… 5 and 6
Dammit, look at me!
HIS modus operandi is fear and intimidation
Military style authorization
Slaps my face, throws a chair
Do I look like I fucking care!!
Teases me, room B16 at 6 am!! No one’s there til 9
Beat that goddam drum
Fletcher,
sadistic, unrealistic, unachievable observations
Draconian degradations
Maniac—Malignant—Malevolent
Abuser Composer,
humiliating triangulation
Tanner, Ryan—Me
Alternate to Core, we all want that tour
I know my worth, I’ll fight this clown
Work for it — he shouts at me!
I practice like a madman, sacrifice my lover and my life
Beads of blood splash my kit, digital metronome blinks
I’m gonna nail a double-time swing
Drum solo, drips with blood,
band-aid after band-aid
Whiplash
Caravan
I know them off by heart
Lost Tanner's folder,
I’m back in the game!
Obsession for perfection,
raw sweat and twisted tears
Throbbing blisters, fixated fear, head-spinning drum double
Lincoln Center, here I come
Rose Theater
Allen Room
Dizzy’s Club Coca-Cola
Diamond Education Center
It all goes wrong, crash bang
whiplashed in my car
YOU’RE DONE!!
I’m lost and finished, but things turn around
He invites me to a finale, and tries to fuck me up
Changes the score, coz I rattled him out
I come back and turn it around…
What the fuck are you doing!! He rages
I’ll cue you in….
The new me has come unbound
C-A-R-A-V-A-N
Good Job! he says and smiles
Whiplash was written and directed by Damien Chazelle in 2014
SUMMARY: “Whiplash’s plot is quite simple. Andrew Neiman is an up-and-coming Jazz drummer who has just made it into the illustrious Schafer Music Conservatory and is taught by the uptight and borderline sadistic band leader Terrence Fletcher, who is jaded by the current idea of Jazz in the modern world, and deep down desires greatness from his students.
After making it into the conservatory, Andrew begins to lose touch with everything else in his life, his family, his love life, and anything that could get in the way of him achieving perfection, an idea embedded in him by Fletcher. In the end, Neiman is brought all the way down, and he almost loses everything, but finds the greatness deep within him to succeed, and finally get the one thing he had focused on so much for his entire experience in the band: the approval of Terrence Fletcher.” SOURCE
Whiplash — Henry Jacob Hank Levy
Caravan — Duke Ellington Juan Tizol
© Chantal Weiss 2025. All Rights Reserved
About the Creator
Chantal Christie Weiss
I write memoirs, essays, and poetry.
My self-published poetry book: In Search of My Soul. Available via Amazon, along with writing journals.
Tip link: https://www.paypal.me/drweissy
Chantal, Spiritual Badass
England, UK



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