ivrig att behaga
Worshiper: Eager to please
------Drop my heart
Eager to please
-----Fall
---------Apart
Break my knees
---------------Eternally bow
Inner scream
---------Scatter my ashes
In the wind
-------Take it all
All from me
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------------------Falling off the
-----------------------------Deep end
About the Creator
Tanya Lei
A poet, if nothing else.
In a blank space, captivating words flow freely to create something that has not existed before.
From my mind, to yours.
https://www.instagram.com/soulpaintedart/
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Violence Begets
"Any last words, cowboy?" "None you'd understand, sodbuster." "Funny. That's Marshall Sodbuster to you. But I meant some last nugget that would help us in the adjudication of the myriad offenses counted against you and your gang. I wasn't asking for penitence."
By Adam Diehl6 days ago in Fiction
Comments (2)
Gosh that was such a mesmerising photo. Ooo I love the layout here. Love how you're guiding our eyes to do a zig zag quite literally. As well as how it's happening naturally. Absolutely love the rhythm. It is so... Let's see 🤔 in some ways mystical. Gothic mystical. That definitely acted like — falling off the deep end. Outstanding work as always Tanya 🤗❤️
This was so poignant. The way you made it rhyme was so beautiful. Loved your poem!