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It Sure Does

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By Rowan Finley Published 2 years ago 1 min read
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When you see someone

with one of the greatest smiles,

and they are quite sad,

- -

it makes you want to

do something about it, no?

For me, it sure does.

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About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Komal10 months ago

    Ah, this one hits deep in the simplest way! 😊

  • Colleen Walters2 years ago

    The story of my life a lot. It’s always important to let them see the Light in you but not let them steal it away. Empaths are easy targets, helping to our own detriment, and losing ourselves in the process. Boundaries are essential for self- preservation.

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    YES!

  • T. Licht2 years ago

    so simple yet so true. Love this

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    The biggest smile can cover the greatest pain.

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    only problem is that the greatest the smile, the more the hurt is hidden.

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