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Your strict regime
Made me scream
Your sadistic theme
Had nothing to redeem
I saw your smile gleam
Directed at me like a beam
You take everything to the extreme
You punish however you deem
You never cared about my esteem
Now it’s time for me to leave, full steam
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Comments (6)
I've just been reporting the plagerised stories (sorry again this has happened. It's such a horrible thing to do), but that doesn't mean I can't read and enjoy yours in the mean time.
I've been with a narcissist before and I'm so glad I'm not with him now. Loved your poem!
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You can NEVER leave Vocal you’re ours forever HA HA HA! I mean, you’re awesome! Great poem!
There seem to be a lot of people who’ve experienced narcissistic abuse on here. Its such a weird “when you know, you know” type of subject.
You know that's right. Do narcissists have the capacity to change, I believe not, some people believe they can. Is it a built in trait which they cannot control. i tried changing one, did not work. Just talked to my friend who is trying to leave but her narcissist is sticking to her like crazy glue, all the while doing his thing, never changing. It is a hard thing for the children caught in between. So sad.