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It Clings

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By Amber AllehoffPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
It Clings
Photo by Steffen Lemmerzahl on Unsplash

I stepped out into the snow today, felt the cold crawl up to my ankles, and walked to the mailbox. I turned to see my footprints pressed deep.

I do exist today; there's proof.

I walk alongside them back inside and when I look again it's like I'm not alone.

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Amber Allehoff

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  • Rachel Deeming10 months ago

    Flipping heck. So simple an idea but the feeling here is deep. I think it's going out into the cold first speaks of fragility maybe; then seeing your own footprints as an indicator of your existence is poignant enough but the idea that seeing the two sets makes you feel less alone? That's the kicker, I think.

  • Karan w. 11 months ago

    This invites us to ponder the deeper meanings of life! Amazing 😊✨

  • Pure Crown11 months ago

    Wow this is interesting with The short sentence but it have deeper meaning

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