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By Jordan ZunigaPublished 4 years ago โ€ข 1 min read

Let me go at the break of daylight, where the shadows start to flee,

Where I can come to and fro and sing triumphantly,

A pleasant of tune, of what comes soon, through storms and rain despite,

For what's in sight, throughout the night, becomes a promise as you fight,

Let me go upon the battlefield, to claim all of what's in store,

As the enemy comes about at the trumpet call for war,

A spoken word, the command to give, not to perish but surely live,

So a defeat became a victory, for all witnesses to see,

Let me sing joyfully, at the start of the new day,

For all that was wrought, for what was sought, my heart did not dismay,

Let me believe, so ever full of hope, of the thoughts that would accrue,

Let me go down to the battlefield, as I hope to see this through...

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Jordan Zuniga

Aspiring christian creative writer creating pieces to provoke thought and give God and Lord Jesus Christ the glory! God bless and I hope youโ€™re doing well!

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