Is this the end? Send...
A Nonet
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Hello. It's me... again. Sorry. Just...
well... sorry. It's just... well... silly...
I know. We've never even...
... well... even met... yet... this...
This. What is this? I...
I don't know. I...
All I know...
Please write.
>Send<
About the Creator
Caroline Jane
CJ lost the plot a long time ago. Now, she writes to explore where all paths lead, collecting crumbs of perspective as her pen travels. One day, she may have enough for a cake, which will, no doubt, be fruity.
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Comments (23)
Brilliant job!
Today's world in a nonet-shell! Smooth entry! Good luck š¤
this masterpiece deserve to be ranked. Hope you be the first position. Iam also a new writer, may i get some support from you?
A creative take on the challenge. I love it.
Romance in the new age. Are they who they say they are? What are they doing when they are texting? At least with phone calls and speaking to one another we can hear ambient noise to figure out something about them. But, to hide behind words on a screen-- that is cruel.
The anxiety and uncertainty really stuck to me like a veil of embarrassment for this person!! I love it!! Great work Caroline!!
Ahhh, that uncertainty, the second guessing and self-doubt all strung out in a jumbled message. Loved this, Caroline!! Congrats on TS :)
hesitant in love and all things heart...so well represented here. the 'send' was genius. Congrats.
The final plea, "Please write," conveys a genuine yearning to bridge the distance and initiate a meaningful conversation, love your works, subscribed.
This is so well done. Very clever and fits perfectly with the times we live in. Great work. Congrats on a well deserved Top Story.
Congrats on your top story.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! šššššš
Great take on the challenge, and I know that feeling so well
Boom, there it is. Congrats, Caroline on another fine Top Story! :)
Oh. This is brilliant, and so clever. Congrats on the TS.
Love the creativity of this! It's always intimidating to press "send" on these messages š
The chat approach to this is brilliant.
oh...love this modern approach, Caroline. As always, wonderful writing - I can see this appearing in the winner's circle!
So this was like an online relationship or long distance relationship? Loved your poem!
Love this! So creative! The last line as the send button was such a great choice!
Thank you for the interesting and delicious content. Follow my stories now.
What a clever representation of the ephemeral nature of postmodern, virtual romance!
Been there and never did find the words to put on paper (or email). beautifully said.