Innocence meets Autumn
Falling leaves Haiku
By Novel AllenPublished 4 months ago • Updated 4 months ago • 1 min read
Laughter evanesce.
Senses gently awaken
Seasons...youth...drifting.
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Caution to the wind
Wild transient joy...carefree
Youth romps in color.
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Childhood, frolics...laughs
tumbling, climbing, falling
Transitory bliss.
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Entranced, wind joins in
Scattering beauty. Laughter
Echoes long after....
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Happy, remembered
In the passing of the years
Childhood memories.
About the Creator
Novel Allen
You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.
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Comments (11)
This is the first haiku for the Challenge that I've found with multiple stanzas like this. Absolutely brilliant and really paints a picture.
This was so delightful Novel! It brought back such good childhood memories! Well done sweet friend! 🫶🏾🧡🍂
Lovely, Novel, reminded me of jumping into the heap of leaves when I was young. My son loved doing it too!
There's something special in the unconventional rhyming of after with laughter in the third haiku, which brings out the idea of echos as well! Well-wrought!
I join the lovely voices below, this made me nostalgic...not so long ago I chased the autumn, leaves myself. Such bliss. Love the cover pic a lot. Unity for all.
🍁🍂🍁🌞 Children and autumn joy. Well done! 🍁
This is so... Frolicsome. I love when wind joins in!
That was so nostalgic and wonderful. Loved your poem!
Nice, calming haikus. They inspire a sense of tranquility and an image of childhood bliss.
This feels so warm and nostalgic.
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