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In the Wake of the Winged Hour

A Step Taken Toward No Certain Shore

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
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A stranger moves in the fading light

his face carries warmth but also the cold of winter

I search for words but none stay long enough

he walks between the end of day and what is coming

the world keeps turning and forgets its places

a swan leaves the water without looking back

I hesitate but lean toward the quiet sound

a promise I think I hear though nothing is spoken

the spell will not hold it slips before I touch it

a breath that fades as soon as it begins

a page not turned a story still waiting

time softens until nothing is steady

the leaves bend holding their own history

their silence spread across the thinning air

the clouds hang heavy layered like worn cloth

a bell rings though no one stands to hear it

I walk alone yet the past brushes against me

a glimpse of memory almost near enough

the shadows breathe then blur into each other

voices rise low inside the body like water

the night arrives carrying a dim light

a lantern swinging above a restless tide

I step across the line from day into dark

not quite arriving and not ready to leave

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • L.I.E5 months ago

    Such a wonderful poem, love how you describe the scenery of walking in day to no night, and the thoughts that comes with it.

  • Krysha Thayer5 months ago

    This fleeting moment, between day and night, is so poetic and you've captured it so well with such imagery. Well done!

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