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In Front

one then the other

By BrenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
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carefully

i place one foot in front of the other

i adjust

my weight accordingly and lean

into the step

and then repeat on the opposite side

i place one foot in front of the other

i am now committed to the step

this path is set

(other aren't and never will be)

i know where i am and i don't

while this is not etched in stone

i don’t know where i am

mid-step somewhere…

my head is down

i look neither

forwards nor backwards

i don’t want to know

where i am going

and i know

where i have been

so my view at this juncture

is moot

carefully

i laid

one sad hope on top of another

it fit

so i did it again

i adjust

my weights; my hopes

both according

to need and merit,

and a modicum of fickleness

my journey

started when it began

and wont be completed

until i reach the end

sad poetry

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    This was so deep and emotional! I loved it!

  • Joelle E N2 years ago

    Wow i love this. So apt. Nice job

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    As long as you keep moving...

  • Dana Stewart2 years ago

    Wow. This poem flows really well. It’s relatable, and I appreciate the hopeful ending.

  • Nice piece ❤️💯👌😉📝

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