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Immurement

literally a part of the place now

By BrenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Photograph taken by Mark A. Wilson (Department of Geology, The College of Wooster)

i could only watch

as each brick was slowly laid

inches from my face

i was gagged and bound

prevented from impeding

those who sought my end

and as each course grew

i could plainly see my end

in this waning light

the last brick is placed

i was swallowed by darkness

time will now take me

Haiku

About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Love the multiple haiku structure Brenton ! That image is funny even if the poetry or not.. but knowing you it’s some type of symbolism slash social commentary! ☺️👍

  • Oh wow, so tragic. May I know the backstory of this? Like what actually happened? Loved your Haikus!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Horrific, absolutely terrifying.

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Oooo, that made me so claustrophobic!! Your words painted that picture too well, lol.

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