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Immortality

The eco of life

By Marie381Uk Published about a month ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Immortality

It calls to me from beyond the breath,

a quiet field where memories refuse to fade,

and every step I take toward that unseen place

feels like a promise that will never be betrayed.

Immortality is not the endless stretch of time,

it is the echo of the life we choose to keep,

the whisper of a name that does not drift away,

the fire that survives when all the world is asleep.

I look for it in every rising tide of hope,

in every answer that arrives without a sound,

because somewhere in the hours still to come,

my soul will rise again on holy ground.

And when the final night tries to close its wings,

I will stand with all the strength that light can see,

for immortality is not the fear of being gone,

it is the truth that lives forever inside me.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Grahamabout a month ago

    What insight you shared in writing this poem. Good job.

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