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Immortal Skies

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By Cathy holmesPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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Oh, immortal skies

Angels paint on blue canvas

I miss you, my friend

heartbreaksad poetrynature poetry

About the Creator

Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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  • U.Rdiya3 years ago

    It's always a great feeling, to know our loved ones never really leave us!

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  • This was very emotional. Loved it very much!

  • Nani3 years ago

    This is really good. Relatable and heartfelt.

  • C. H. Richard3 years ago

    Just brought tears to my eyes! Beautiful💙

  • Aw this was so thoughtful ❣️ I can certainly relate to the emotions ❤️

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    wow! Beautiful language, imagery, and also so sad. Very well done!

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    That last line got me. Beautiful but bittersweet. Loved it, well done :)

  • Caroline Jane3 years ago

    Ach winter is too grey. Bring me some sunshine on a cloudless day too.

  • Awwww, my heart

  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    This one says it all! Great work!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Heartbreaking!!!💕

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