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If Not Now: When?

The James & Oneg Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza - #5: You’ve Got Mail

By Judey Kalchik Published 2 years ago 1 min read
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I can’t stand it because I see all of the negative parts. The broken hearts and hesitant starts the calloused compassion that doesn't disturb the righteous' sleep.

Stand it, though, I know I must preserve my trust that we are so much more than dust and removing compassion's callouses is a promise we can keep.

It's just; the troubles roll in waves, heroes cower as the mad man raves and our innocents sleep in early graves as our shock-numbed compassion decorates our conscious with colored swatches.

I know I cannot save them one and all. Pain's a bully playing hardball Greed, hunger, arrogance are here for the long haul Now that I see clearly; how can I be one that stand and watches?

I hope you join us, we upstarts. With us, reinforce ramparts, bringing compassion in by handcarts Saving just one is a start; take action- there's no time to weep.

~~~~~

I wrote this poem in response to James & Oneg's Summer Writing Challenge Extravaganza. I was tagged to participate in the fifth challenge of the series.

Theme: "You’ve Got Mail! Challenge: start a story/poem with the last line of an email or letter (or in my case- text) you recently received." The line that starts my poem comes from a friend's text I received this week. (Thank you, Eric)

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Judey Kalchik

It's my time to find and use my voice.

Poetry, short stories, memories, and a lot of things I think and wish I'd known a long time ago.

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  • Oneg In The Arctic2 years ago

    This was such an impactful and deep poem/prose. It holds so much weight and heaviness and you wrote it so well.

  • James U. Rizzi2 years ago

    “Pain's a bully playing hardball Greed, hunger, arrogance are here for the long haul” what killer line with this one. You knock the challenge out of the park

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Awesome!!! Loved this, Judey!!!♥️♥️💕

  • The adult to the child tossing starfish back into the sea: "You can't save them all. What does it matter." Child, considering the starfish in her hands before tossing it back into water: "It matters to this one."

  • Jazzy 2 years ago

    I agree with Ashley, this is FANTASTIC ☺️

  • Atomic Historian2 years ago

    You’re welcome ☺️ In strangely beautiful way I’m glad it made your day

  • Ashley Lima2 years ago

    Beautifully written and so poignantly true. Stellar poem!

  • Rob Angeli2 years ago

    That's so perfect, what a great call-out. Love it's roll-along.

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    That's how I try to live my life. I just never thought about it until I read your poem. Love it.

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    Love the lyrical quality.

  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    A fabulous & extremely eloquent call to action! I loved it!

  • Jay Kantor2 years ago

    Ms. Judey ~ "If not now" reminds me of a theme from a radio psychologist, Toni Grant (maybe you've heard of her) The opening as well as the closing quote: "Life is not a dress rehearsal." Thanks for the mail, Jay

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