Only if love was real
What made me feel
The play of the mind
Or the beat of some kind
Find the way in
To feel each bump
To see him in that way
And want him that much
Yet when it is all over
To feel so raw
To fall for him like that
And to fail in love
Is a man out in the way
Who will stay
And make me feel that way
Find the real love
To you I do look for
My Love
To find you in mess of life
Only if love were real
Or was it love at all
To find love at what cost
Some say it is
Else say not
I want to find true love
Even if I rot
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Sarah Danaher
I enjoy writing for fun. I like to write for several genres including fantasy, poetry, and dystopian, but I am open to trying other genres too. It has been a source of stress relief from my busy life.
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Whoaaaa that ending! That was so unexpected. I found love and I rotted. Now I'm nursing myself back to life. Awesome poem!
“Even if rot”. That’s determination.From birth Til death we seek love. You deserve it. 🥰