If love were a sea
Sway back and fro like the wave
I love you deep in me
And let all else go away
You will swim in each tide
Give you a safe cove to hide
Stay away from the bad air
Flow for good days in the sun
Safe from the hard rain run
Give you a life that is calm
If you will love me long
Swim side by side ever on
Our love will run as deep as a sea
Down in the deep, we will be
Do not let them drag us down
I will blow like the wind in your sails
Be the air in the flow of the sea
Fly high in that air
No fear of the fall
Last more than the sand of time
I will love you all my life
Let us sail with air in tow
Live like the free air
I love you as deep as the sea
To float over the waves of life
I wish this for you and me
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Sarah Danaher
I enjoy writing for fun. I like to write for several genres including fantasy, poetry, and dystopian, but I am open to trying other genres too. It has been a source of stress relief from my busy life.
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Day 4 of Quitting
If this is how sobriety feels, maybe it’s better to go through life a little buzzed… this, along with other hits like, I want to kill myself, I wish I was dead, and I’m going to throw myself off a bridge have been the only thoughts on rotation these past few days. I promise myself that if, in a month, I still feel like this (‘this’ meaning despondent, full of rage, and simultaneously numb) I can go back to smoking. Until mid-February though? Nicotine is off the table.
By sleepy drafts7 days ago in Longevity
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Very moving
This was so deep (pun intended) and so beautifully written! I loved it!