If I were a sculptor
You'd be my Venus de Milos
Carve your beauty, curves, and arms
If I were a painter
You'd be my Venus of Urbino
With all your feminine charms
If I were a singer
I'd perform Your Song
and try not to get it wrong
But I'm not a sculptor,
So can't work with wet clay in my hands
Nor am I a painter,
So can't make the paint flow to my demands
And, you know I'm no singer
So can't do a melody justice with my voice
I am a writer
And words are the best way for me to rejoice
That we are still together.
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Comments (49)
I could have sworn that I commented on this one as I read it a few days ago. Great work. I love the flow and choice of words. This is one of your best Paul. Congratulations on the Top Story!!!
Paul - Missed this one! Congrats, and very charming! 😁
How very sweet.
Very nice 🙂
Im in love with this one!! great work Paul!
Thought I commented on this but don’t see it so— redo! I adore this one!! And “Your Song” as well. :)
Very nice, Paul. From the heart. Loved how it fell into itself in the end.
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Congratulations on Top Story! Well deserved.
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Wow! Nice
Wow...nice poen
Your Song is one of my fav songs ever! I loved this! You are so incredibly talented. Well-deserved TS!
Okay, I like this. And Elton would approve... Great TS!
This is a lovely poem!
Congratulations, Paul! Well deserved!
Congratulations on achieving top story status!
I very much appreciate your poem and I loved your last lines! Congratulations on top story🥰
Oh my goodness, this is such a beautiful poem, Paul! This little love and adoration/admiration journey was such a beautiful piece of art! I’ve said it a lot, but your versatility it quite amazing– you can write the dark so eerily and the light so brightly. Congrats on this gorgeous top story! 💫
Congrats! On the top story and the knack it takes to pull off that love story
Just beautiful. Congrats on Top Story
Gorgeous work, my friend!! Congrats on Top Story!!
Such a sweet poem! Congrats on TS!
Congrats to you Paul 😎
This is beautiful! In a way, your poem reminds me of Elton John's "Your song".