If I Left Here Tomorrow
A Poem
If I left here tomorrow
Would you even notice?
Or would you just notice all the unpaid bills
All of the uncooked meals
Would you miss me?
Or would you just miss the thrill of calling or texting me
At three in the morning when you’re lonely
Or need help
Would you miss the person?
Or just things that I do for you
When I’m not taking care of me
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By Atomic Historian2 years ago in Poets
'20/20'
"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan7 days ago in Beat
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Now, that's some questions that NEED answering. No substitutions, retractions, or deletions. Scalpel-sharp poetry. A definite win.
Now, that's some questions that NEED answering. No substitutions, retractions, or deletions. Scalpel-sharp poetry. A definite win.
Some good questions
I often wonder these things too. Loved your poem!
I often ask these same questions, Atomic. I feel this one too deeply to comment further.
Love this!!!💕♥️♥️
Terrific work!