If I could get what I want,
I'd only ask for love and trust
Because these are the rare,
valuable things out there.
***
If I could do what I want
I wanna be happy
with my own job
and make good money
to feed my loved ones.
***
If I could relive one memory
I could not choose,
there are so many
Both good and bad ones
but I wouldn't change any
looking back in the past
I don't regret a thing...
even if I said the opposite
back then, when I was young...
***
If I could say one last thing,
it would definitely be a warning
for the kids
who'll form the unknown future
Please do not let the computer
rule what's been given to you
'cause you know what's precious?
The time, you waste,
not the money, that you made.
***
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It all started when Echo was five. She kept having these nightmares where she would just fall into a dark pit, screaming insanely loud, yet no one, not even her own parents would hear her. It was terrifying. But the most horrible part was that when she'd wake up panting, her parents were nowhere to be found, just like in her dream. She'd always cry herself to sleep alone and helpless.
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Sontryes, great meaning here. I'm happy to subscribe to your work.
Poignantly penned!!! Love it!!!💕❤️❤️
"If I could relive one memory" That is a big dilemma. What would I choose, I think the best one when I was huged by my children, There were a lot. 🤗
Time is the most precious thing we give to those that matter
GOOD POEM WITH DEEP FEELINGS
Love and trust are so powerful, they can be as important as air and water to us when deprived of them for too long. Amazing work here!
Wonderful expression of deep feelings of the past.
Oooo, I especially loved those last two lines! Fantastic poem!
Lovely philosophy of life, Anna! Well done!
This brought tears to my eyes in the end 🥹💕 So true, time should be appreciated more than money 🙏
This is lovely. Well done.
1,000% ❤️😊😍 Anna! “ if we knew then what we know now” this is a stunning piece, my dear ❤️
A noble and sincere admonition at the close of a nostalgic and wistful piece! Well done, Anna!