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I Wish I Was The Moon

Everlasting And Eternal

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
I Wish I Was The Moon
Photo by Robson Hatsukami Morgan on Unsplash

oh, to travel the paths that you’ve blazed

setting the scene for the love songs we’ve made

even holding the constellations in your gaze

and all of the dreams and promises proclaimed

I wish that I could be more like you

cause everybody wants to be with the moon

whether falling in love or just feeling blue

the universe continually, before you swoons

I wish I could dance, carefree on the river

the way that you do, without stirring up ripples

to have the quiet power to make a lover’s heart quiver

but nothing about love is ever that simple

I wish that could hang on the clouds in the sky

and see what you see, from the view of your eyes

to find peace in knowing although everyone dies

there is pure joy in the thought, that there are no goodbyes

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About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • Mark Graham2 months ago

    Great job for we all may see forever what we need and want to see.

  • Darkos2 months ago

    purely Beautiful 💜🩷❤️🌕

  • Joe Patterson2 months ago

    Beautifully written.

  • Tim Carmichael2 months ago

    This is such a beautiful poem! It really captures that feeling of looking up to someone and wishing you could be as effortlessly amazing as they are. The way you talk about the moon and the river makes your admiration so clear.

  • LUCCIAN LAYTH2 months ago

    There’s a tender humility in the speaker’s voice. The repeated “I wish” creates a gentle ache admiration turning into quiet yearning.

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    Lovely poem, Kelli. I could feel the sense of longing.

  • C. Rommial Butler2 months ago

    Well-wrought, Kelli! Never that simple, indeed!

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