You say this
You swear that
But your actions don’t even match
No your actions don’t match
You think you can trick me
But I’m not falling for no of of your trickery
You tried it
But I’m way smarter than that
Don’t play me for the things that you lack
That’s a very stupid move though
What you getting mad for
Your attitude is very poor
You can go on head and pack your stuff , and walk out that door
You did some crazy stuff in the past that I tried to ignore
But this time you really hurt me to my core
I tried to be your good thang
But you just kept driving me insane
And now we are just seeing rainy days
This is why we should go our separate ways
About the Creator
L.I.E
Hey, I'm Emily! Thanks for reading. Hope you read something that inspires you. Or something that you find relatable.
Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH7 days ago in Critique
Comments (6)
I can hear this being sung and it sounds so beautiful, I felt every word and your feelings and thoughts came through very nicely, it read almost like a story too and I could imagine the scene that goes with it. Very well written 👌🤗💗 👏
Sounds like a Dear John letter. Very nicely done. Great job.
Lovely poetry there
Great poem about dealing with a gaslighting person! Excellent poem 👌
Straight up, this hits hard! Emily Raw, real, and no-nonsense—calling out the nonsense and taking back the power. "I tried to be your good thang" hits like a mic drop.💀 Tough love anthem right here!😊❤️
Awesome poem...