I want all the chocolates
I can’t be satisfied with just 1
By Marie381Uk Published about a year ago • 1 min read

By George’s Girl 2025
I want all the chocolates
can’t resist those chocolates,
I want more than just one.
But once I start to munch away,
I can’t stop, I have to carry on.
My gall stones start to hurt and ache,
I end up sick in bed,
I dream of cakes and tasty treats,
Not bloody steak and veg instead.
In pain still, I crave the sweets I love,
It’s hard to turn and walk away,
Yet I know I’ll pay the price again,
If I don’t stop today.
About the Creator
Marie381Uk
I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️


Comments (3)
Chocolate is good, but always remember moderation is the way to go and you will have some for later and have no stomach upsets. Good job.
Oh, the sweet struggle of chocolate cravings! This poem captures the bittersweet tug-of-war perfectly. A delicious temptation, but oh, the consequences—both relatable and amusing! Well written!😍
I GOT CHOCOLATE FROM SCOTLAND WHEN I VISITED GLASGOW AND ADENBRA AND ALSO LONDEN IN OCTOBER 1996 WHEN I WENT TO MOTHEEWELBRIDGE TO RECEIVE SPHERICAL GAS TANKS FOR MY COMPANY WHICH I USSED TO WORK AS PETROLEUM ENGINEER