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I want all the chocolates

I can’t be satisfied with just 1

By Marie381Uk Published about a year ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

I want all the chocolates

can’t resist those chocolates,

I want more than just one.

But once I start to munch away,

I can’t stop, I have to carry on.

My gall stones start to hurt and ache,

I end up sick in bed,

I dream of cakes and tasty treats,

Not bloody steak and veg instead.

In pain still, I crave the sweets I love,

It’s hard to turn and walk away,

Yet I know I’ll pay the price again,

If I don’t stop today.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Chocolate is good, but always remember moderation is the way to go and you will have some for later and have no stomach upsets. Good job.

  • Komalabout a year ago

    Oh, the sweet struggle of chocolate cravings! This poem captures the bittersweet tug-of-war perfectly. A delicious temptation, but oh, the consequences—both relatable and amusing! Well written!😍

  • Ali Sadeek Ahmedabout a year ago

    I GOT CHOCOLATE FROM SCOTLAND WHEN I VISITED GLASGOW AND ADENBRA AND ALSO LONDEN IN OCTOBER 1996 WHEN I WENT TO MOTHEEWELBRIDGE TO RECEIVE SPHERICAL GAS TANKS FOR MY COMPANY WHICH I USSED TO WORK AS PETROLEUM ENGINEER

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