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I study his eyes

What do you see?

By Pauline FountainPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - March 2024
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There is an enduring tenderness in the love of a mother to a son, that transcends all other affections of the heart.

‘The Widow and her Son.’ A short story. Washington Irving (1819.)

I treasure the time spent with my son.

I look at his radiant face.

I study his eyes.

What do you see?

I see compassion.

I see wisdom beyond his years.

I see actualisation and achievement.

I see ‘making real.’

I have never wanted to possess my son.

Yet in this moment, he is mine.

I hold his body close.

I embrace him.

I whisper, ‘Beautiful I don’t want to let go.’

Pauline Fountain. © 2024. All rights reserved. No part of this work may be used or reproduced without the written permission of the author.

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About the Creator

Pauline Fountain

Writing and photography provide a creative outlet to reflect with meaning on my life.

My mental health? Bipolar 1 (Rapid Cycling), Complex PTSD and Functional Neurological Disorder.

My son’s gentle wisdom furnishes me with the gift of hope.

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  • AmynotAdams7 months ago

    Hi I subscribed this was beautiful 💗💗💗plz lmk what you think of my latest poem 💞💞

  • Ignited Minds11 months ago

    Such a beautiful and heartfelt reflection, Pauline. Truly moving and full of love.

  • Rebecca Pattonabout a year ago

    Aww...this is adorable and heartwarming! Good job!

  • S. A. Crawfordabout a year ago

    This is gorgeous, love oozes from every word

  • Congratulations on your top story.

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    Love that this made Top Story!!!

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  • samrin mohammadi2 years ago

    Amazing!

  • Romano Meyer2 years ago

    beautiful

  • Archery Owl2 years ago

    So very sweet

  • Hi there, newly subscribed. This was an " eye-opening poem" and a well deserved Top story!

  • Cyrus2 years ago

    Congrats!

  • Anna 2 years ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • Christy Munson2 years ago

    Congratulations on Too Story! This piece reminds me of the relationship I have with my nieces and nephews. Beautifully written!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Ameer Bibi2 years ago

    Congratulations 🎉 for top story . Embrace your unique voice, for it holds the power to connect, resonate, and inspire others in ways only you can. Keep penning your truth, and watch as your words illuminate the path for others to follow."

  • Does letting go mean losing? Or can one release without the grief

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    beautiful. congratulations on TS. My sons are now 57 and 56 and each time I look at them, I fall in love all over again. They've made me so proud, as toddlers, young men, husbands, and fathers. Thank you for reminding me to look at their eyes more often.

  • Gena Adamson2 years ago

    Short and sweet! I love my son 🥰

  • Sajan ali2 years ago

    Great dear

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Lovely little piece Pauline! hope you are travelling well. Best! 😊

  • Manisha Dhalani2 years ago

    Very nice

  • Your son has beautiful eyes! Loved your wonderful poem! Hope you're doing well

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    AH yes. Sons are wonderful...hold them close as long as you can. They grow up so fast and fly solo. Cherish that hug.

  • This is so beautiful, Pauline. I can very much relate to this.

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