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I Seen Him Under the Ice The Devil

He tries to drag me under I look away.

By Marie381Uk Published 4 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

I Seen Him Under the Ice The Devil

The pond froze heavy,

grey glass over the hollow.

I walked alone,

my breath showing.

Then I seen him under the ice,

face pressed to the frozen sheet.

Eyes wide and black,

his mouth moved silent.

I knew who it was,

the devil waiting.

Trapped yet free,

in his own cold world.

He claws scraped the surface,

marks fading quick.

I stumbled back,

his smile widened.

No stick, no stone could break it.

No prayer could hide me.

I ran, but still I felt him,

the ice groaned like laughter.

Since that day,

each winter calls him back.

He waits for me,

under my feet. In the Ice water.

to take me somewhere warmer.

Called Hell.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham4 months ago

    This is one frightening poem Miss Marie. I guess you must be in the Halloween mode. Good job.

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