I Remember
Like it was Yesterday

I remember the warm touch
Of your hand on mine
A lingering touch of skin on skin
That sent shivers of anticipation
Up and down my spine.
*****
I remember your scent
As you slowly moved near
That sweet scent of lilacs
Enchanted my soul and
Quieted my fear.
*****
I’ll never forget the way
You looked on that day
Your beauty unmatched
With true feelings unveiled and
Openly on display.
*****
The taste of your lips
Wrapped around my heart
Pulling tears from my eyes
Knowing, at that moment
We would never be apart.
*****
I remember you held tight
And whispered in my ear
“I love you.”
Those three words that changed me
Have echoed
For twenty years.
About the Creator
Gerald Holmes
Born on the east coast of Canada. Travelled the world for my job and discovered that kindness is the most attractive feature in any human.
R.I.P. Tom Brad. Please click here to be moved by his stories.
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Outstanding
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Comments (54)
Such a beautiful love poem!
That's such a sweet poem ❤️
Gerald, a great poem and beautiful writing. 👏☺️
Beautiful description and display of love. Well done
This was beautiful and so passion-filled Gerald! I loved the affectionate language and adoring that came through in your writing!!! So well written!!
Oh, just lovely.
This was so incredibly sweet
A beautiful and moving poem, Gerald! I love this so much 💕🙂
So pure and sweet! 💓
A very sweet poem!
A beautiful love story. ❤️🥹
Wonderfully wonderful. Simple words that speak such volumes. Lucky you and you.
That filled my eyes with tears. It is just so beautiful.
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This is a beautiful poem. So romantic.
Great
Precious!
Beautiful. I'll say no more. Simply beautiful.
💖💖💖💖
As real as it gets, Gerald! Great job! Congratulations on the Top Story!
Straight from your heart and into ours, beautiful. Congratulations on Top Story
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Oh my. This is gorgeous. ❤❤❤
Congratulations on your Top Story❗