I miss you more than that rain during that sunny day
Dried up on hard cement, evaporated inside my eyes
By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Nora Hutton on Unsplash
Can you stoke out
the fires of my heart?
Dirt breathes rain in
Airless tomb.
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Girl! Amazing
Airless tomb. I stopped breathing when I read that line. I immediately suffocated. Your words are soooo powerful! You are super talented!