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I’m taking my mind off of you

Don’t Hug Me I’m Scared inspired Fibonacci poem, Duck & Red. Red’s perspective

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
I’m taking my mind off of you
Photo by Cory Bouthillette on Unsplash

Inspired by my Vocal brother and very good friend Mike Singleton - Mikeydred, who helped me figure out how to start this poem. Check out his awesome poetic work!

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Cars

Let

Me run

(Come with me!)

Your sweet eyes, staring

By JC Gellidon on Unsplash

Distraction off the wheel, stand still

By Freddie Addery on Unsplash

love poems

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 years ago

    I'm so happy to see that you've tried the Fibonacci! This was brilliant!

  • Love the words and the images sis , great take on this, totally love it

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