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I wish I had treated you better,
but now it’s a Dear John letter.
Can’t blame you for the goodbye.
And yes, I’m gonna cry.
The tears in my eyes.
I’m torn apart.
Sorry I
broke your
heart.
About the Creator
Joe Patterson
Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.
Comments (9)
Great rhyme, great emotion. This is excellent, Joe!
Good take on the challenge , excellent words
So heartfelt and honest. Wonderful work <3
Not many will apologize when breaking someone’s heart. Bittersweet
This is just so touching. Really well done
Very nicely done. Poignant and heartfelt.
This is really well done.
Heartfelt, Joe.
This is very well written!!! Outstanding work, Joe!!!